You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-introduce yourself -explain what is wrong with the furni

Dear Mathew,

I am Paul , I have been living in your property since three months for rent with my wife and two children.I am happy with the interior and other arrangements of the house.

However, I would like to bring your attention and action on the dining table. It was well- enough until yesterday as we had only used for just dining. But, yesterday when one of my children climbed on to clean the roof the leg of the table made creaking noise and I found the leg looks old and broken. By god's grace my son escaped with small scratches on his face and Knee.

I would like you to replace the table with an another usable piece. We are unable to use for anything and it is bit arduous to manage without the table with my babies.

I really look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Paul

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Mathew, I am Paul , I have been living in your property sin...
^^
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... for rent with my wife and two children.I am happy with the interior and other ar...
^
Line 8, column 44, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a usable' or 'another usable'.
Suggestion: a usable; another usable
...ould like you to replace the table with an another usable piece. We are unable to use for anythin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 113, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...re unable to use for anything and it is bit arduous to manage without the table wi...
^^^
Line 8, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o use for anything and it is bit arduous to manage without the table with my babi...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 150.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17517158658 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686666666667 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 506.74238477 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.282604285 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186078318628 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784125055668 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581971852734 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101200524859 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405604041682 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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