You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house.
Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. It was a good time which I had spent with you the last weekend at your house. It will always remain a memorable time in my life. I’m writing this letter to tell you that when I reached my home I find my coat was missing.
Today morning when I was getting late to catch a train, in the rush, I left my coat. The coat is of black leather which has two side pockets and one pen pocket on the upper left side. I think the coat is still hanging behind the door of your room. There are very crucial things in my coat left pocket that is my identity card, driving license and my office diary.
I’d request you to send my coat to my address. You can either hand over my coat to my friend who is coming to my home next Monday or you can pack that coat in the box and courier me to my residential address.
Looking forward to having a great time with you again.
Yours truly,
Harsimran Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I hope this letter finds you in the best...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: This morning
...my home I find my coat was missing. Today morning when I was getting late to catch a trai...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eat time with you again. Yours truly, Harsimran Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, still, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.171875 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94554083053 2.80592935109 69% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588541666667 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4218616078 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.75 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345287769502 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134176220917 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799193287329 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217807179465 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571250239838 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 50.2224549098 177% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 12.4159519038 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 78.4519038076 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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