You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter1) explain why you have moved.2) describe the new house.3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Mike,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing in reference to inform you that I have recently moved to a new house. Now the hassles of a long drive to and from office and the resultant fatigue have come to an end as the new apartment is located in close vicinity to my office thus I can spend more time on reading and outdoor sports activities.
To elucidate the new house is a spacious three bedroom apartment located in the suburbs of the city additionally it offers all modern amenities like a gymnasium, swimming pool, 24 hours security and free parking. The society also offers daycare facility for the kids and has a shopping complex for the daily grocery needs.
Since we have moved in last week we plan to throw a house warming party on the weekend. Why don’t you pay us a visit? I can assure you that you will have a lot of fun.
I look forward to your response.
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'apartment' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'apartments'.
Suggestion: apartments
...e new house is a spacious three bedroom apartment located in the suburbs of the city addi...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...complex for the daily grocery needs. Since we have moved in last week we plan to t...
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Line 8, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... I look forward to your response. Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38953488372 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37462103094 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645348837209 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5070060398 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313836335743 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128603272276 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110890237169 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158270139879 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11079993333 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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