write a letter complaining about accomodation
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to an accommodation booked in your hotel Caravan for three days. As a regular business traveller, I stay in a variety of lodgings but I can say that my experience with your hotel accommodation has been the worst due to a number of reasons.
Firstly, despite having a booking confirmation for a deluxe room, I was given a standard room without air conditioning stating that all deluxe rooms were occupied due to some important event. I had made several complaints to the staff about this, to which I was given an assurance of room change the next day.
Secondly, the washroom was dirty, I had complained several times to the receptionist before someone from the cleaning staff came and cleaned it.
I can assure you I am highly dissatisfied with the service and hope that you will take immediate action on this unprofessional misconduct from your staff. As such, I can assure you that have already lost me as your customer due to this incident.
I look forward to your immediate action on this complaint.
Yours sincerely
Vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85561497326 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81619733476 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625668449198 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.501408347 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0713834757272 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273835361606 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434746096215 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0337193334589 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318790690593 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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