You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic:
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
In today's times, nothing rules as much as NEWS does to any individual in modern society. News literally decides for the social norms and their repercussions. There is a huge hunger and market to get the latest news, which is instantaneously fed by the giant News channels and agencies through their filtered and edited news. Let's explore more about their modus operandi in detail here via this essay.
It would not be an exaggeration to state that most of the urban population wakes up to a myriad of news via print or visual media every morning. Unless they are not done with the initial several minutes of TV news newpaper , its hard to imagine their day to get kickstarted. But what is there in these news which make our society hooked? There are myriad of factors like the Sensationalism of the news which feeds many hungry hearts, emotional news which make people feel relatatable. Also, shocking news which give jolts to people in their otherwise mundane lives.
Ofcourse, news editors not only know and play the game but also how to be at the top on that and hence they would not hesitate to show the news of deaths, robberies, killings, rapes , terrorism just to garner the TRPs without considering the impact or any effects on the general society which ofcourse includes kids and elderly too. Despite of this, it would be wrong to state that only bad news are shown on these mediums, some good and positive news are broadcasted too which fills everyone with joy and hopes. However, with every day the number of good news are becoming lesser and lesser paving more way to ugly news only which is a big concern and should be dealt with accordingly.
To conclude, though we, as a consumer, must know the real facts of society which can be harsh sometimes, at the same time we also need a positive dose of mood upliftment to look forward to our days and lives. And hence, a balanced mix of both bad and good news would make a healthy start to anybody's day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Suggestion: this news; these newses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63714285714 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39346717359 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.077981345 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.928571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136886726764 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536733350478 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309487378156 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791721356733 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414175860059 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.