You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
In Britain, Old people, after attaining a certain age frequently cohabitate with people within their age group and are taken care of by health workers. At times, the government is required to foot the bills for the care. Some people opine that government should fund the care while other people think it is the responsibility of the family. In my view, I believe it is the responsibility of the government to bear the cost due to reason that will be discussed in this essay.
Firstly, It is the duty of the government to provide a functioning health care system for it's citizens which includes old people, with functioning facilities and ensure the health practitioners are doing a proper job in caring for them. Although, there may be privately owned old people’s homes, these might not be affordable for an average citizen which emphasizes the need for government owned homes.
Secondly, a number of people have spent many years of their lives working and paying tax to the government for the sole purpose of providing them with basic needs, amenities and Old-age benefits. Therefore it is the right of the elderly people to request government funding for their health care owing to the fact that some families might not be able to pay the bills required for the care as a result of some old people not having any children to take care of them. In other words, it should be left for the government to handle the payments for their care.
In conclusion, while some individuals believe families should pay for their elderly one’s care, it is more of the duty of the government because they ought to provide a fully functional public medical system for the elderly and provide funding for old people who don’t have offsprings to care of them at old age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79672131148 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59004772514 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485245901639 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5725479258 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.3 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311309673529 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141656699823 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483740720885 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211131024356 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365318433532 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.