You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
The most of people think that healthy's life is only when you practice some exercise or you do not eat fried foods. But in my opinion this is one of the biggest mistake of the population because when they are doing some exercise they thinks that they can eat everything without any restriction.
In my country people who want to became healthier start to practice exercise everyday and stop to eat "junk food" as we called fat food as Hamburger, Hot dog, and others. Moreover, it is important to change everything in your life starting in your head that is crucial for you can keep being health avoiding eating junk food.
When you start to practice some exercise like yoga, cross fit, gym and other types of exercise you start to feel better healthy and mentally making you more confident in everything that you need to do even work. It happens because your body start to act more than when you are just sleeping and the same things every day. Your blood start to flow more in your body helping your brain keep more in focus and your thought start to flow easier than when you are doing anything.
In my opinion, with all my experience in the gym or practicing exercise it is essential for everyone to take some supplements to help you to get more energy. In addition, the supplements help you to avoid illness as you are taking important vitamin to improve your challenges and being healthier.
In conclusion, to make your life better it is important you feel your body better and healthier to avoid any sickness and you can see your body in front of the mirror and feel comfortable and more confident in your life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
The most of people think that healthys life is only when y...
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Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
... when they are doing some exercise they thinks that they can eat everything without an...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...me healthier start to practice exercise everyday and stop to eat 'junk food' a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...our challenges and being healthier. In conclusion, to make your life better it...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6323024055 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38481040136 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481099656357 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.9543988648 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.8 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169667187321 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819288843024 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339228449879 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10117649945 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157022948723 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.