Young drivers are careless and overconfident, and too many are killed in accidents. To eliminate this problem, we could teach children the skills of safe driving while they are at schools.
It is becoming increasingly difficult to ignore the significance of road accidents and associated loss of life on the roads, especially due to rash and reckless driving by youngsters. It is clear that the number of accidents can be prevented with awareness programs so I am of the opinion that, these programs must be started at school level itself.
To commence with, an army people assert that, schools are the place where one gets basic knowledge about rules and regulations that we need to implement in his social life. More importantly, people do not forget what they learn at their younger ages. To exemplify, people hardly forget geometric calculations and fundamental history of their nation. In my opinion, if they learn the necessity of safe driving with these basic subjects it will be a boon for the safety of themselves as well as for the society.
Furthermore, young age is the age of energy, overconfidence and enthusiasm, it is quite necessary to control these emotions to some extent to reduce the number of mishaps. Unless they understand the detrimental effects of accidents, they would control their way of driving .Education is the only way to make them understand the consequences of accidents.
On the contrary, pupils are already overloaded their curriculum with many important subjects, it is unwise to ask them to learn this subject. In addition to this, mandatory age to learn driving is 18, since they do not know learning when they are at school; it is a foolishness to ask them about the negative side of over speed and related problems.
To conclude, today thousands and thousands of accidents are happening every hour around the world. The government and authorities have tried several measures to tackle this issue. In my opinion, a school is a fundamental place to start teaching about avoiding reckless driving.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, well, as for, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05537459283 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84965095449 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9779081822 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.384615385 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146150259569 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045421863955 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035674629242 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728630932138 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320492834478 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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