Due to technological advancements, there are differences observed in varied ideas and behaviour between generations to generation, due to which youngsters of these days hold a different opinion from that of their parents or grandparents. It is evident that these differences in attitudes may create troubles in both the generations, which I am going to discuss in subsequent paragraphs.
To start with, the behaviour and ideas of the younger generation vary from older people thoughts. Firstly, the ideas which are generated in this generation young people is sometimes unacceptable by the elder people. For example, youngsters of these days want to spend most of the time playing video games or browsing the internet. But, the older people, do not allow their children to enjoy as per their desires because they were not allowed to do when they were young. So, these type of differences could bring distance between relationships. Furthermore, elderly people consult their neighbours if they have any doubts for clarification, whereas these days’ children depend on the internet as there could be varieties of solutions available through different people’s ideas, which again is not accepted by grandparents or parents because the information available on it may not be accurate.
According to my perspective, although the variations in ideas are benefited sometimes, they cause severe problems in families which cannot be underseen. Firstly, these differences in attitudes may crash the parent-children relationship, and children may go against their parent’s views and get trapped. For example, a recent investigation in the USA has shown that almost half of the children do not agree with their parent’s opinions and experiences, and get involved in various illegal activities such as drug addiction or crimes. Secondly, the generation gap could create a disparity in relationships, such as younger people disrespecting the elders or disobeying their words because there are differences in how they think and act from that of elders.
To conclude, the variation in thoughts and behaviour create the gap between the generations. In my view, the lack of proper communication and misunderstandings are the problems usually arise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, such as, in my view, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53179190751 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24103793668 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540462427746 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1899635074 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.714285714 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408695255058 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120048387634 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689333779679 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221758764767 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105836810292 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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