Young people spend their time in shopping malls. This has negative effect on young people and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Shopping centers and malls have become a routine get to gather places for adolescents. This has an adverse effect to not only teenagers but also to society. I disagree agree that this habit has negative impact on both. However, I do believe that spending too much time to such places is harmful to everyone.
On the one hand, these shopping centers are become major attraction among youth. Teenagers can meet new people there and exchange their skills by mutual discussion and conversation. As a result everyone might learn new things from each other and all can acquire some unique different ability. Moreover, these places work as a stress buster, because nowadays teenagers are having copious home work and assignments which makes them very stressful. By visiting malls and shopping places they can feel relax and rejuvenate their mind. For example one of my friend’s younger brother always find himself happier after visiting such shopping malls once in a while.
On the other hand, if such malls and shopping centers are being visited too much by teenagers then this would work as a deterrent in their studies. This will lead to poor grades to them which will ultimately make their academic score low. It is very hard to find job nowadays and with poor academic marks this will deteriorate the chances of getting employment. This means the society will not get responsible and employable citizens. In this way this habit of spending time to such places has a negative impact on young people as well as society.
In conclusion, spending limited time in shopping malls or visiting such places would not harm anyone unless it happens frequently. There should be a balance in life of teenagers, once they have free time after studies; they ought to be allowed to visit such shopping places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...here and exchange their skills by mutual discussion and conversation. As a result...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99337748344 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47699825836 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0229762379 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.7058823529 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247744244717 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828738195821 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874782323125 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150660114735 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709987998694 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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