In many countries, people are not taking care of their elderly relatives but seeking help of professionals to look after them. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Describe your views and give examples from your own life.
Taking help of caregiver has become common nowadays. People use their services in order to take care of their family members and relatives. In my opinion, this brings ample benefits to both caregiver and caretaker. Therefore I think it is a fully a positive development.
Firstly, these caregivers are well trained in the area of elder management, hence can rest assure regarding their near and dear ones. This means that they are very accurate to look after elder people from morning to night. For instance, one of my friend's father has hired such a service for her mother and he is very delighted by this. The caregiver is so punctual in his timetable from regular meal providing to medicines providing everything happens at precise manner.
Secondly, by utilizing this outsourcing work from others, an individual can heed his/her attention to the core aspect of life such as business or job. She/he can easily concentrate on work without worrying too much about their elder family member or relative. If any person has not taken this kind of service then he may constantly be thinking about the elder member of his family and this can distract him/her adversely the progress of his/her business or job.
Finally, these kinds of care-providing facilities create plenty of job opportunities. Many unemployed workers can work in this sector and earn bread and butter for their family. Furthermore, the government can reinvigorate this area and form some rules to regulate and protect the interest of both the parties. This can boost the job creation in this field and eventually help the economy to grow gradually.
In conclusion, seeking help from professional is certainly a positive development because it not only helps an individual to focus over his/her job or business but also the trained person can give the older people the love and affection, which is essential and required at that particular age.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 5.05154639175 337% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 937.175257732 172% => OK
No of words: 316.0 206.0 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08860759494 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71638461808 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 127.690721649 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 290.88556701 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0074079321 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 4.34317383033 282% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2167806161 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734863109048 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049489220439 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125785740722 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338210986927 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 41.2886597938 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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