Your class has watched a panel discussion on how young people use social media websites. You have made the notes in the image.
Write an essay discussing two of the ways in your notes that people use social media websites. You should explain which of these you think is more useful for young people, and provide reasons to support your opinion.
You may, if you wish, make use of the opinions expressed in the discussion, but you should use your own words as far as possible.
Write your answer in 220 – 260 words in an appropriate style.
Now, social media websites are more and more public over the world, so young people all have at least one account and use them every day. There are many purposes of using website as sharing information, creating new relationships, special earning money. Some one can make a lot of money from social media. I chose 2 ways that are useful for young people the most to note in the panel's image. In my opinion, they are the spot light methods that we usually think about social media websites.
The most valuable is updating information. Many articals of several subjects with comments of readers appear in a day, you can get information that you care about. Easy to find the content you need for your business with many points of view, it is so effective to improve your work. Some websites are organizated by professional people, and they could give you a number of advises and lessons learnt, they are all useful.
Besides, based on the number of users, the social websites are the vitual market where the buyers introduce and sell their products. No rare of people became millionare by online business. Young generation are dynamic and active, they are able to keep up with networking changing. Social websites are the new way for them to build their own careers and become successful.
On the other hand, the website also has toxic things, and we have to be careful using them. It makes us unbelieve in ourselves, depeding on them and have spirit trouble.
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- Your class has watched a panel discussion on how young people use social media websites You have made the notes in the image Write an essay discussing two of the ways in your notes that people use social media websites You should explain which of these yo 61
- Your class has watched a panel discussion on how young people use social media websites You have made the notes in the image Write an essay discussing two of the ways in your notes that people use social media websites You should explain which of these yo 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Someone'?
Suggestion: Someone
...w relationships, special earning money. Some one can make a lot of money from social med...
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Line 1, column 491, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ally think about social media websites. The most valuable is updating informatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, so, as to, at least, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74803149606 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40464499763 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8361451189 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319200835435 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914638595612 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631212017491 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164625144605 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824969985952 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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