Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• say why a driving licence is advantageous
• recommend a driving school
• give any extra guidance/tips
Dear Munmun,
Hope you are doing well.
As soon as I received your letter, I remember my driving learning journey. When I was young, my father told me that having a driving license is like an identity such as voter or aadhar card.
It is crucial and beneficial when you learn driving techniques. Having knowledge of various road signs is essential for any grown-ups or adults in order to avoid road accidents. Also, during any emergency, you can help others on road, if you have driving licence & knowledge both. This way you can also save lifes. Hence, nowadays driving knowledge is vital like having knowledge of swimming to save life of yourself as well as others.
Since you are staying nearest to Ruby, I would like to suggest you to go to the nearest driving school i.e. Ruby Driving Association and register yourself. Don't forget to carry identity proof while registering yourself for driving classes. Also, I would like to give you a tip, request your driving teacher that you want to avail personal classes if possible. This is a secret of learning in better way.
Happy learning!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...s crucial and beneficial when you learn driving techniques. Having knowledge of various...
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Line 9, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...ving Association and register yourself. Dont forget to carry identity proof while re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87234042553 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45196853892 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3701805704 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264425690936 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973528478134 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840967687588 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145066311773 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970530398765 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.