youth nowadays are involved in many crimes. what are the causes of this? in your opinion, how can we reduce youth crime rate?
In the meantime,crimes have been increased among youth; there are many reasons which affect adolesents behaviour. Such as , unemployment, lack of partents supervsion, and media . This essay will discuss the causes of this problem; moreover, how can we decrease youngester crime percentage.
For the most part when we think about youth ‘s illegal act we think about guardians’ attention towards their teenagers. Not only does it affect on moral ethics but also leads to increase the rate of crimes on soceity. family should look aftre their members espacially during adolescence; they ought to set the foundation of positive behaviour from the beginning which assests youth to understand the impact of crimes on commuinty members. In 2017, a research has been published by the Egyption Gazette showed, most of Fathers and Mothers spend 12 hours of work everyday which gives youth a space to be involved in illegal actions.
From my point of view , there are diverse ways to control and ban increasing crimes between the new generations. Such as, the effective role of celeberities and social media influencers to instill the positive eathic on youth. Moreover, parents have to monitor their dependents. Besides, holding school campaings to raise awareness about crimes’ drawbacks. A study has been done by Finland’s government said that,a percentage of crimes among teenagers decreased by 40% after condacteing awareness compaigns through schools and media showing the demerits of crimes.
In conclusion, In the modern era, the rate of crime among youth has raised due to various issues;to avoid that gaurdians , educationlists, and celeberities ought to present and provide extra activities to raise awareness of the disadvantages of illegal actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, look, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50549450549 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00146584111 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652014652015 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.191534651 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.615384615 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255466205262 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075308219908 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605810464806 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149258998212 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638935653206 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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