— 2018.11.11 — Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government is not doing enough work to educate people the important of nutrition and healthy eating.
Nowadays, with the increase in junk foods and fast food chains, our diet has become much more unhealthy than in the past, meaning the government should be teaching people about eating healthily, and people should avoid eating fast food. Some people believe that the government is doing well in educating us about eating healthily. However, I think that the government is doing nothing to educate us about living a healthy lifestyle, and I will explain why in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the government still hasn't made "Health and nutrition" a compulsory subject students have to take in schools. If governments made this a compulsory subject, kids will learn from a young age as to how harmful fast foods are. For example, if people did learn about healthy eating when they were young, they would only eat healthy foods, and wouldn't even go near fast foods, because they've learned about how damaging they are towards their bodies. Thus, these people won't be tempted to eat unhealthy foods because they've learned about how much fat and sugar they have, thus allowing them to live a healthy lifestyle. In comparison to a person who has never been educated about healthy eating, who would much rather choose junk food over healthy foods because they have never learned about how dangerous fast foods are towards people's bodies. This example shows how educating people about "Health and nutrition" when they were young will let people stay away from fast foods so their diets would only contain foods that were healthy and nutritious.
Secondly, the government still hasn't set any laws to regulate the price and advertising of unhealthy products. Somehow, the government still allows fast food companies to freely advertise and price their products, which is one of the main reasons why people want to eat these foods in the first place. And oftentimes, fast food companies make their foods in commercials look better than they actually are, so people would end up buying but then finding out it looked nothing like it did in the ad. For instance, if a person saw a commercial on TV about a huge mouth-watering cheeseburger, people would definitely go buy it but end finding out that it was different from the commercial. Also, fast food companies are allowed to make the prices of their products really low so consumers would choose it over other foods. For example, if a person saw a large pizza that cost only two dollars, they would certainly choose that over a salad that cost ten dollars. These two examples show that since the government doesn't have any laws about regulating fast-food companies, people will be drawn in by the cheap prices and advertising.
Admittedly, the government has spent a large amount of their money on medical care systems and public hospitals so medical services are accessible to nearly everybody. That way the health issues people get from eating unhealthy foods can be cured because of the medical services provided by the government. However, for people who live in rural areas, hospitals there will lack doctors with professional knowledge and clinical experience.
In conclusion, the government still isn't educating people enough about the importance of eating healthy foods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2717.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09756097561 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59491425093 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472795497186 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 810.0 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7431431495 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.85 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.65 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150488333107 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628572043061 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608934994092 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121019585287 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709130603361 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.