Most people think that difficult experiences could impact them negatively. However, it is well known that difficult situations in our life help us to understand our environment as a society and as a result of this, keep us improving our knowledge in order to have more experience. In the next lines I will show you some reasons related to difficult experiences and how they become valuable lessons in our future life.
Firstly, life based in difficult experiences could help you to understand the sense of your life. For example, if you have to study for an exam related to your career, you must to spend your time reading lessons and even making some exercises before the day to take your test. As an experience, when I was a teenager, I can remember that I had to take an admission test in order to apply to a public university. Eventhough, I prefer to spend my time in other activities instead of studying and practicing before the test, and as a result of that, when I finally went to take my test, I could not applied, because I needed to skim my notes and remember how to answer the question in a variety of topics. Therefore, when the test was over, I felt very stressed and frustrated because of my irresponsibility. Moreover, I had to wait at least one year to take the next opportunity, in order to apply to the university.
Secondly, saving money for the future. This is another situation in which many people prefer to spend their money in things less important than improve their future. For example, when I was coursing my career, I had to work very hard in order to pay my studies and my appartment, it was very difficult because I could not save almost anything for my future. However, when I finally got a promotion, I could have extra money and I did prefer to use it in unimportant activities than in my future. As a result of that, I had to wait for at least ten years to buy a car and and almost 15 years to buy my house. Eventhough, I have to wait a lot of time to be aware of my situation and realize my projects.
In conclusion, we can state that difficult experiences could improve our life and have a better vision to understand to reach our goals. In addition, we need to focus our thoughts in important things and express to others, mostly young people, all these experiences in order to help them to have good results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('wisely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('manner') instead of another adjective.
... First, If we take and use our time in a wisely manner, we could obtain better results than us...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 1977.66487455 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 407.700716846 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26993865031 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51138399474 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668711656442 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 618.680645161 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4874767246 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151676233856 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561465053591 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343582605164 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115474836938 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016613820881 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 86.8835125448 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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