The 20th century experienced a revolution of technology. Undeniably, the development that technology brought, changed our lives dramatically. Most of these changes contribute to make our lives more comfortable, easy and convenient. In my opinion, technology made the world a better place to live. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, technology made communication easier for anybody across the world. Earlier on, you had to write and send letter and so on. The recipient had to wait several days, weeks or even months. Nowadays, we can just chat, call or take a picture with our mobile phone, send it right away to someone which means it helps us share a moment and experiences with our friends or loved ones and so on. Furthermore, with the help of technology, we can connect and communicate with people from other continent. For instance, people will be able to tell others an important news without losing time.
Secondly, it made learning easier in many ways. There are many kinds of free online courses that you can take and this is a great opportunity for people who are not able to attend courses in person or do not have the chance. Thus, If you want to know more about someone or something, you just need to visit the site and search the content you are looking for. Facebook, YouTube, Google and many other sites gives us a information about many different things such as our favorite celebrities and news. In addition, technology-especially the internet-is a great source for everything. If you have assignment, you can easily search the subject and learn many things from it.
Finally, the development of technology made advertising and travelling easier for people. To give an example, you can use social media to promote your business and influence the others which will bring a wider connection and more sales. With the help of smart phone, tablet and so on, people can easily locate places, get some information about a certain places so that people will not get lost and can enjoy their trip.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'important news'.
Suggestion: important news
...nce, people will be able to tell others an important news without losing time. Secondly, it ma...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: MANY_KINDS_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'frees'?
Suggestion: frees
...r in many ways. There are many kinds of free online courses that you can take and th...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e, Google and many other sites gives us a information about many different things...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ther sites gives us a information about many different things such as our favorite celebrities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, i feel, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89518413598 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7528211092 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56940509915 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2016685205 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212526558569 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699120247454 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867792905265 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131877577985 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565157638041 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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