the ability to maintain friendship for a long period of time with small friends is important than making many friends easily
People always need to have friends whom help them in harsh situations or spending their time together. They should have some ability to find relevant friend and preserve their friendship over a long period of time. I subscribe to the idea that they need find small number of friends and maintain their friendship over a long time to feel better during their life.
First, it is a psychological behavior that people easily trust to their old friend than new ones. They have enough information about their old friends and know their behaviors well. This features help them to feel better and speak about their mysteries with them. For instance, I have a close-friend and I know her since the elementary school. I really trust to her because I know anything about her. These acknowledge helps me to say my problems to her. Trusting to other people plays an important role in people's lives because they feel that they are not alone in their life.
Second, Friends who know each other over long period of time help to each other in different situation. Old friends support their friend in many situations. For instance, I required much money to rent an apartment in a foreign country to continue my academic education but at that time my family had many problems so I could not ask them for help. My ancient friends help me financially. They borrowed me enough money and I completed my study in a good university. These supports are associated to friends who maintain their friendship for many years.
Third, I believe that people who find new friend easily lose them soon. The temporary friendship that is not based on strong information about each other or strong feeling is not stable. They want they friend only when they need to be happy but after that they do not need to be with them. This temporary relationship also conducive to depression or aloneness feelings. People like to have an effective relationship with other people like their family to feel happiness in their life.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, people should find their friend based on correct acknowledge and maintain them to feel better in hectic life. By doing that they can trust to them and speak about their problems with them. Furthermore they always are supported by their permanent friends so they never feel aloneness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...d preserve their friendship over a long period of time. I subscribe to the idea that they need...
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Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
..., Friends who know each other over long period of time help to each other in different situati...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...d speak about their problems with them. Furthermore they always are supported by their perm...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
...ir problems with them. Furthermore they always are supported by their permanent friends so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, second, so, third, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89898989899 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56588522007 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439393939394 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2049554593 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8333333333 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95833333333 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292345993057 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985383811503 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860284561692 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181198202866 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884787810883 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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