academic subject
In today's world, having knowledge in any field can come to our assistance at the required time and place. Most of the people like to acquire knowledge merely at their desired academic subject and want to become professional at one specific field whereas most of the others want to have education in several academic majors. Personally, I think that being educated in one academic subject is better than having many academic diplomas. I feel this way for two reasons which I explore in the following essay.
In the first place, anyone who is expert in one field can be more creative than who has shallow knowledge in many academic subjects as well as this subject. To be more specific, concentrating on only one academic major and achieving higher academic degrees at this particular major create more opportunity for anybody in this situation to be more creative than others at solving problems.
Secondly, people with a particular expert have more chance to assign for the important positions in the big companies. My sister experience is a compelling example of this. She is a computer science Ph.D. graduated now. Her aim was to get a position in the google mind group, and her dream is coming true now. If she did not get higher education in her desired subject and instead had undergrad degrees in many subjects as well as CS, it is not possible for her to get chance to be selected for this job position.
To sum it up, I strongly believe that academic knowledge acquisition in a specific subject can be a better choice in comparison with educating several academic subjects. This is because, With focusing on one subject and being more detailed in, people will be more creative in this, and they can likely be selected for important job positions in their future life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, as to, i feel, i think, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85294117647 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6134577625 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496732026144 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.945897047 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.230769231 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327650682922 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130265405222 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150773874097 0.0737576698707 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227135850366 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871740794802 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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