A/D? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Traveling is an astonishing option to spend leisure time. Many travelers believe in order to have better adventures, it is better for travelers to do it without helping while others think to have a better journey, a travel guide is a necessity. As far as I am concerned, I like to lead by a tour guide.
First of all, a tour guide not only shows you the places but also gives you the history and necessary things about the place. With a tour guide, people informed about the place that they visiting and can get a better understanding of the features of the place. For example, in 2017, my family and I visited Shiraz, the capital of Fars a province in Iran. One of the places that we met was Arg, a castle which the king lived in. If we had not had a tour guide, we would not have the information which we have now. Such as, Arg was reshaped in order to become practical for being a jail.
The second reason, a tour guide can help you to find places which only locals know that they exist. A local tour guide has complete knowledge about both places and handicrafts. They know which places should be visited by tourism and where they should buy goods; therefore, tourists have no problem to find souvenirs. For example, as mentioned before, our tour guide helped us to achieve all of our purposes. Without her, we could not visit either place nor have souvenirs.
Finally, domestic tour leaders help people to become familiar with local foods. Because of the resistance in the place, they know what and where to eat habitant’ food. In my opinion, eating local foods is one of the most important objects in traveling around the world.
In conclusion, it is essential to have a tour guide on trips, because of the requirement for information that they give to travelers like places, handicrafts, and foods. So, it is wise to get help from them to have an overwhelming journey.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help you find' instead.
Suggestion: help you find
.... The second reason, a tour guide can help you to find places which only locals know that they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58112094395 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52672388394 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513274336283 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8191053804 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7368421053 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148013650173 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517648689535 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475886705053 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957917989489 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476910843926 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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