Working at home by using computers or telephones and working in the office both of it has it own merits and demerits too like a coin has two sides. Here I can not support purely for work from home or work from office, some times working from home is more advantages than the working from office and vice versa. I want to explore the advantages and disadvantages of both working from and from the office.
Firstly, I want to tell about the advantages of working from home, yes, it is less time consuming system because nowadays there huge traffic jam everywhere in the country, so by doing work from home we can reduce the time consumption. And because when a person working from he/she need not spend more more money travelling, so again it is economical process too. Even company also need spend money infrastructure, they can spend that money for other investment which help their company grow faster. For example in new york city renting the corporate office is too costly and moreover company has to provide so many facility like car parking and etc that cost more expensive for company. This not only expensive for company but also for the employee.
Secondly, the disadvantages of working from home, certain work can not done by individual for that we need team work. To do so there should be a common place where everyone can meet and discuss the issues. So here we need office to achieve this target and the individual working from home doesn't help this specific aspect of work. Further some sector, the employee can not work from home like doctors, physical therapists, nurses, field workers and so on.
Thirdly, the advantages of working from the office, when people working in office at least they have chance to interact with each other. When they are interact with each other they share their knowledge, skill and experience with others so that help the other employee to do the work efficiently whereas work from home it's high impossible to do that.
Finally, I conclude that both working from as well as working from office has it's own advantages and disadvantages as well. So we can not determine which more superior.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'whereas', 'as to', 'at least', 'for example', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237623762376 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.136138613861 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0816831683168 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0915841584158 0.046263068375 198% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.049504950495 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131188118812 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0420792079208 0.0351676179071 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4435177625 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.019801980198 0.0309702414327 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0841584158416 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0222772277228 0.0209618222197 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148514851485 0.0139019557991 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2161.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 371.0 408.028673835 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82479784367 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304582210243 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239892183288 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132075471698 0.174417080927 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0835579514825 0.112833075102 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4435177625 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469002695418 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.1268303083 59.2087087015 83% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1875 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7688117395 48.84282405 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0625 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 0.644075263715 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.54480286738 271% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.1767183288 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.48214285714 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328437469678 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.160427955121 0.103427244359 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105213127818 0.0752933317313 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.584661731496 0.497263757937 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148299085474 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131909884476 0.114077575197 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110978957977 0.0781384742642 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.298717166349 0.336927656856 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.096285418537 0.067059652881 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209070784613 0.210909579961 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111510517216 0.0618886996521 180% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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