After they complete their university studies, some students live in their hometowns, others live in? different towns or cities. Which do you think is better … living in your hometown or living in different towns or cities. Give specific reasons for your answer.
Whether living in hometowns or living in other cities after university studies, has always been a controversial debate in society. I certainly believe that it is far more beneficial to move to a new big city after graduation. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, I totally agree to look forward to getting the best career chance by moving to a big city. It is worth mentioning that job opportunities are more achievable in the more crowded towns. There are more chances to find a decent career with a well-paid salary in big communities. My personal experience is a compelling example of that. I remember after graduation, I looked for a well paid job where I live, unfortunately, I did not find any as I used to live in a small city. However, when I moved to the capital, I found several opportunities. I was able to seize my dream as I was hired in a big company. As a result, I got paid very well and I was able to buy a nice house.
Secondly, I definitely agree with the idea to move to another city to obtain more experience. If I moved to a new place, I would have a chance to encounter new people, and to experience new places. My cousin's experience is the best illustration of that. She moved immediately after graduation to another city. Indeed, she met new people from different countries. Therefore, she got to know them and learn about their cultures and their languages. Besides, she enjoyed the art museum there as she used to spend time every weekend watching portraits. As a result, she made new friends and discovered new interesting places.
To sum up, there is no doubt that following a dream is a crucial step in everyone's life. I can kill two birds with one stone if I moved to a new town. In this way, I can get a nice job. On the other hand, I can get a chance to experience a new life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i feel, no doubt, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39481268012 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77340354559 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518731988473 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1092885305 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.3043478261 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0869565217 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13043478261 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149273464495 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383920633613 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747172730666 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102432922405 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941629996177 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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