Agree or disagree with the following statement:
Pets should be treated like family members.
Give reasons and examples to support your opinion.
If people keep a pet they must care about them, as a human being. Treating pets like a family is really important because they are also living like humans. If you treat them bad they got hurt too and it is aganist the humanity. This essay will discuss about the reasons why pets are so necessary.
First, the old people are all alone so it is good for them to have someone always with them. In this modern era, children do not prefer to take care of their parents and grand parents which is painful and they do not live with them, with age they are out of energy and can not work that's why they have to spend all time alone. For instance, my friends grand father adopt a
dog because he after the death of his wife children left him in an apartment of single bed and visited them once a week. now, he got a pet as his child and take care of him. He is delightful that every time he has some one, the work that people can not do but pets can. His pet also do his care. Thus, the example elucidates that treating a pet like family is very essential
Secondly, if you have pet in home and you treat them in a good way, it have a positive impact on your children too. Children learn what they see and you give food to pets on time, children also become responsible. For example, I am a pet lover and i accustomed to keep pets with me and takes good care of them, When we expand our family our child look after his baby brother with such responsibility at the age of seven, Therefore, this example illustrated that by having pet in family you do not need to teach your children how to behave with family members.
To wrap up, there are lots of benefits if you treat pets like family whatever you do comes back. In my opinion pets deserves to have a good family while some may disagree but I believe that pets are born to b loved just like humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15642458101 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07375475579 2.67179642975 78% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.5729483139 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234844187254 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879000757106 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702555804183 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144377779526 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641930399062 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.