during our careers we work with different kinds of people all of them have unique characterstics and personality traits in your opinion which of the following is the most important characterstic of a co worker a serious attitude regarding their work.
In our professional life we met many people and we do not know them, also, the characterstic of every person is rare in its own way. We should have same basic characters that are required by a professional workers. In the following essay I intend to put forth my reasons to support my views.
First, work should not be taken for granted and the most significant thing the worker must have is the responsibility. Any work you are assign for have to be done carefully. For instance, after graduation when I first started the work at office one of my co worker was irresponsible. Moreover, our staff of 3 people suffer because he does not finish work on time, sometimes he took off without informing us. Therefore, this example elucidates that responsiblity is the most essential in pupil who works.
Second, punctuality is the key to success and most necessary quality. The only hinderrance in between your all achievements is to be late for work. For example, my colleague accustomed to come late and he was my senior but when it comes to promotion he did not get promoted just because of his behavior. People shouls be loyal to there work otherwise it will not give you any outcome. Thus, the example clarifies the importance of the time.
Finally, in my opinion workers must have good behaviour, responsible, punctual and friendly too. These habits of a person can make a person professional career more interesting. Once you start loving your work you always go towards your life goals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'worker'?
Suggestion: worker
...ers that are required by a professional workers. In the following essay I intend to put...
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Line 2, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my reasons to support my views. First, work should not be taken for granted and...
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Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n professional career more interesting. Once you start loving your work you always g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 258.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79069767442 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82643993295 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631782945736 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7138700609 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.25 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269466658661 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784249600298 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447039119309 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150891388367 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284836827925 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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