Agree or disagree, people today spend time doing thing they like to do rather than doing things they should do?
Since the beginning of the last century, our world has become more advance than before. Although there is a variety of entertainment, people nowadays could not enjoy this advanced technology. However, this is a solid body of opinion that casts doubt on these beliefs. From my personal point of view, people today spend too much time doing thing they should do rather than doing things they have to given that life today is so competitive, stressful, and expensive. Below I ill strive to explain my supporting points in more details.
The foremost point, life today has become so expensive which enforces people to work more. A survey conducted by the National Association of Finance in California found that many people today want to work full-time rather than part-time. Moreover, "provided that" people work 40 hours a week, they will not have extra time for enjoyment. Consequently, the high cost of living obligates people to work more.
Coupled with the expensive standing of living , the stress is another reason why people spend more time doing things. For example, in the industrial developed countries such as USA and Canada , both parents in a family are under severs stress not only because they both should work as hard as they can, but also they have lots of responsibilities such as taking care of their kids, paying a mortgage, and doing grocery shopping. Therefore, people today under plenty of stress, they hardly find extra time for relax or enjoy.
One final point, the job market has ben so competitive. For example, the software engineers in the Silicon Valley should take courses in their free time in order to keep themselves updated with the current technological inventions. Furthermore, provided that people want to get a good job, they should be constantly studying. I believe in the famous proverb which states “time is greater than gold in term of value”. As a result, to be qualified professionals in this competitive market, people do not have extra time for enjoyment.
Taking everything into a consideration, without a doubt people today spend their time doing things they should do. It is suggested that people compromise and ensure that they achieve responsibility/enjoyment life balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16438356164 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91293525713 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569863013699 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9282972249 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2105263158 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453603895592 0.236089414692 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130404719116 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16796066164 0.0737576698707 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28797353688 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129201766839 0.0645574589148 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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