Agree or disagree people today spend too much time one personal enjoyment doing things they like to rather than doing things they should do?
Since the beginning of last century, world has seen advanced and modern technology. Although there are lots of intertainments, people do not have time to enjoy this advanced life. From my personal intends, I belive that people today spend too much time doing things they should do rather than doing things they like to, given that life today is more expensive, stressful, and competitive.
Firstly, life has become very expensive which enforces people to work more time than before. Research done by The National Association of Finance found that lots of employees prefer to work full time rather than part time. Provided that people work 40 hours a week, they will not have enough time for enjoyment. Therefore, the high cost of living makes people spend more time working.
Next, coupled with expensive life, stressful world is a second reason of spending much time doing thing people should do. For example, in a family both parents are under sever stress. Not only because they both parents should work hard, but also they have lots of responsibilities; such as, taking care of their kids, paying mortgage, and doing grocery shopping. Conseuqently, given that people nowadays under plenty of pressure, they hardly have extra time to relax or enjoy.
Eventually, the job market is too competitive. Provided that people want to get a good job, they need to be constantly studying. For example, software engineers should take courses in their free times to keep themselves updated with the current technological inventions. As a result, being qualified professionals in this competitive market, people may not have extra time for personal enjoyment.
Taking everything into a consideration, without a doubt people today spend too much time on things they should do. It is suggessted that people compromise and ensure that they achieve a resposibility/enjoyment life balance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...d that lots of employees prefer to work full time rather than part time. Provided that pe...
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Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...es prefer to work full time rather than part time. Provided that people work 40 hours a w...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... resposibility/enjoyment life balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23841059603 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85411256095 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4489727786 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0588235294 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522797263928 0.236089414692 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16291693242 0.076458572812 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172928939894 0.0737576698707 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326132045161 0.150856017488 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170186039416 0.0645574589148 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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