Agree/Disagree Q. If you do not make sure other people (especially influential people or your employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life.
Almost all people have some strengths and inevitably some weaknesses. Some people may hold the view that one should only try to avoid his weaknesses to get successful. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that one should also rely on his strengths as well as presenting them to others in order to reach his goal. I personally contend that the more one is able to represent himself to important people surrounding him, the more precious opportunities he will provide for himself. In the following paragraphs, three conspicuous reasons will cogently illustrate this point of view.
One of the reasons coming to mind at first is that each person has a myriad of characteristics including positive and negative ones which may be hard at first for, say(formal?), employers to realize. As it is known to all, to succeed in an interview, one should rely on his distinctive attributes to impress the interviewer and for this purpose, what a better way than stating them(sentence fragment!). Furthermore, most employers carefully scan the applicant’s resume to find out what his accomplishments are in his major or field of study. Subsequently, one might elevate his chance to get the job simply by mentioning his achievements in his resume.
Another equally important point in supporting my opinion is that often the first post that one would be appointed to in a company he is going to be hired in, has a strong dependence on his first impression on the interviewer. This justifies why one should try to show his apexes by emphasizing his positive features. Then, if he could get a prestigious position, it will later help him to go up the hierarchy in that organization more easily. Moreover, when someone proves his capabilities to others, they would more trust him, which in turn enables him to make more extended relations with his other colleagues. This will particularly bring their respect and admiration to him which helps him to boost his self-esteem.
Finally yet importantly, another reason why I agree with the above statement is the indisputable fact that one may get more facilities by highlighting his abilities. The noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics, which are revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country, show that a high percentage of people who receive a decent salary, are the ones who have the skill of making others believe in them. That is, they can easily persuade their employers to give them more important responsibilities, which is frequently followed by a more payment. Consequently, these people have a richer source of livelihood.
In short, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that obtaining people’s positive attitude towards us by letting them know about our strengths can benefit us in many ways, from raising our self-confidence to earning a living more easily. However, that was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are some other reasons and examples, challenging the claim, which are not mentioned above. Certainly, our efforts to represent ourselves may sometimes be adversely interpreted; for instance, it may lead others to consider us as a selfish person. I, nevertheless, firmly believe that its merits outweigh its demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, for instance, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2731.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16257088847 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11805562185 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542533081285 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 855.0 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3198510282 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.136363636 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0454545455 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112322236186 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037347245269 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283368181488 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070267657004 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363872136181 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 86.8835125448 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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