All university students should required to talk history courses not matter what is their field .
Many people think that all the university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. I agree with this statement. We must to know our history before we move on to the future. Because without past we do not have a future.
First, we must to know the history of our country, all the wars, all the leaders. If we do not know this history, we do not know why we have our country. For example, if in Israel students do not learn historic, they do not about independence war of our country. This war was very important, and many soldiers died on this war.
Second, we must to know the historic of all the important people from the past, like Einstein or Tomas Edison. This people and many like theme create all the things we use today; moreover, without them we do not have somethings like electricity, cars and more and more. For example, Einstein create many new theories to the world, so we use on this theories until this days, so we must to learn about him and his theories for move on for the future.
Third, we need to look about the past and learn from the mistake that people done. Many people all over the world try things, some of them successful, but some of them fail. This our opportunity to learn from their fail and do it better in the future, or we learn and will try never return on their mistakes. For example, someone try to build chair with two legs, but when he sat he fall down, now we learn that is no work with two legs.
To conclusion, all our life build about our past. All our future will be better if we learn from people before us. This why in my opinion all the students should be required take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...udy is. I agree with this statement. We must to know our history before we move on to t...
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Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...istory before we move on to the future. Because without past we do not have a future. ...
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Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ast we do not have a future. First, we must to know the history of our country, all th...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... soldiers died on this war. Second, we must to know the historic of all the important ...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...he past, like Einstein or Tomas Edison. This people and many like theme create all t...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Einstein) must be used with a third-person verb: 'creates'.
Suggestion: creates
...nd more and more. For example, Einstein create many new theories to the world, so we u...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...new theories to the world, so we use on this theories until this days, so we must to...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...world, so we use on this theories until this days, so we must to learn about him and...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...on this theories until this days, so we must to learn about him and his theories for mo...
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Line 4, column 330, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...on their mistakes. For example, someone try to build chair with two legs, but when ...
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Line 4, column 383, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'falls'.
Suggestion: falls
...chair with two legs, but when he sat he fall down, now we learn that is no work with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, third, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30981595092 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13040950549 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432515337423 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3211260988 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0555555556 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205366596385 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881783323909 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166995171124 0.0737576698707 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16853849583 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152617427817 0.0645574589148 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.22 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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