A controversial debate is often raised in education system at university level whether to mandate history class or keep it elective. Some groups of people hold a view that history class should be taken by each student. However, other groups of people may hold an opposite position and believe that history class should be limited to individual's interest and degree requirement. From my vantage point, I concur with the latter group and think that history course should be optional. In what follows, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons to justify my viewpoint.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned here is that mandating history class for students of every stream is may cause financial crisis. In other words, pursuing educational university level is expensive and adding a course irrelevant to student's interest or degree requirement could pose fiancial burden on students or parents. A vivid example that can shed light on this subject is my friend's current situation. At present, she is studying nutrition as her majors. As per university requirement, she is required to take history course. Likely, she is working only part-time because of school. She is having trouble to afford her living expenses because she is paying extra money for the course irrelevant to her interest and majors. Moreover, she claims that she has been studying history since middle school. That implies, this course is creating unnecessary burden for her. Furthermore, she could have used that money for food and other daily requirements.
In approaching this issue, another subtle point coming in my mind to justify my opinion is the educational overload. History course is good for students who are pursuing history majors and wants to be tour guide or archaeologist etc. However, students like me who want to be doctor are often wants to take science courses such as biology, chemistry, physics. Most of the people agree that to study for doctor's degree is not an easy task. A student have to devote endless energy and time to achieve their goal. If in this hectic schedule , an extra subject of history would be added, will it be a justice to a student? I would say, it will decline the performance of student overall if he or she will be loaded with additional educational courses.
Aforementioned reasons are the first ones which crosses mind at first glance. However, they are by no means the only reasons available. The noteworthy statistics revealed by scientific research in my country shows that a study conducted among students is an evidence that history course should be elective. The study was conducted among different universities and students of different streams to eliminate any bias in the results. The data showed that majority of students agreed to keep it elective. In fact, in the local survey conducted among the professors in my state showed the same results.
In the final analysis, according to what is mentioned in the body paragraphs above, no one could deny that it is debatable matter of discussion which needs to be elaborately addressed to precisely examine its aspects. Nevertheless, there is an authentic evidence which can lead us to the conclusion that history course should be optional bearing in mind that it may rise educational and financial burden for students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 15.1003584229 238% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2769.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 544.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09007352941 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73024563464 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496323529412 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 875.7 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4403805999 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255354210415 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657474483396 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058544808955 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14070021597 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255280896128 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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