All university students should required to talk history courses not matter what is their field .
There are a lot of arguments among students whether studying history should be something required or it should be something elective. Some people think it should be required to be taken by all students. Students should know more about their history. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I think history should be something elective, specially for students in university. The basis of my opinion is financial and educational.
From a financial perspective, taking an extra course in the university is costly. Nowadays going to the university is not as that cheep. Students and parents have to prepare for it. Students going to university to be specified in a particular career. If students are required to take an extra non essential course, that will increase their tuitions fees for no purpose. For example, when I decided to go to pharmacy school, I know that I will be more specific in the field of science. Adding extra courses to my studying is a burden. That will increase the amount of money I have to pay each semester. I already took the history classes while I was in high school. There is no need for extra history classes. This will not be my major.
Educationally, studying history is enjoyable for people who want to continue in that career, such as a tour guide who need to know more about the historical places, or the archeological sites of the countries. However, some one like me who want to be a pharmacist his interest is to know more about science, biology, pharmacology, adding extra history class to my studying in the college is not that beneficial. I did study history allover my education stages, starting from primary school to middle school ending with high school. I choose to go to pharmacy school because I decided to be more proficient in the field of science. I like to study more about the drugs, and their uses. The mechanism of action of the drugs. The chemistry of the drugs. Studying extra history class in college will make me overwhelmed. I will not be able to mange my schedule.
Some people think that studying different course rather than the major filed, will keep some change in the students life. For example, when I was in pharmacy school I was required to study English and math. That was something not related to my field but actually that was fun. The English class was very enjoyable. The professor was trying to persuade us to speak English during the lecture. That helped us in the future. It helped me when I traveled to foreign country, I communicated easily, and speak fluently.
In conclusion for the reasons I mentioned above I believe that adding extra history class is not beneficial. It costs more for students without no reason. Also , if the students do not specified in the field of history, that will be too much for them to study extra unnecessary course.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2420.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72246370839 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428853754941 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.9 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.8777487237 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3333333333 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69696969697 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 20.0 4.88709677419 409% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221126254702 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566745038309 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562193711823 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132709126786 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761879418343 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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