4days workweek

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4days workweek

Submitted by Mrudula on Tue, 08/20/2019 - 13:11

To avoid the exploitation of employs 4 days of work week concept was introduced while lecture states that the 4days work week will be messy and costly.

Firstly in the passage it was written that many people are ready to work 4day with 80% of their original salary and this will help to reduce costly error because of more rest than usual while speaker opposes this by implying that this is not beneficial for company because hiring more people will increase the cost of training, payment as well as their cost of medical cover and it will need more office space and this point are not in favor of company.

Writer in passage said that reducing unemployment rate will be plus point where as in reality no additional jobs will be created and compitation will be increased for permanent position. company can offer their employees to work overtime to reduce the expenditure of company.

working 4days of work has advantage that employee can have more family time but speaker opposes this because he thinks that quality will be reduced and one has more chances of losing their jobs and employee working 5 days a week will be preferred over 4days worker.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ng unemployment rate will be plus point where as in reality no additional jobs will be c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Company
...ll be increased for permanent position. company can offer their employees to work overt...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Working
...o reduce the expenditure of company. working 4days of work has advantage that employ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 1373.03311258 70% => OK
No of words: 201.0 270.72406181 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77114427861 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29347298139 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562189054726 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 419.366225166 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 21.2450331126 188% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.924739428 49.2860985944 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 191.8 110.228320801 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.2 21.698381199 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06452816374 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0813764062428 0.272083759551 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492951305922 0.0996497079465 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465923044143 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616189132402 0.162205337803 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442060566497 0.0443174109184 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.3589403974 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 53.8541721854 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.0289183223 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 10.7273730684 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.498013245 171% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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