Relationship between people is very important to live in a society. Humans are gregarious in characteristics. People will not able to cope up without the help of others. And the truth is a crucial part of any relationship between anyone. So, I agree with the statement that said telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people for some reasons.
The main reason is that it makes a relationship strong and reliable. If someone is not telling the truth with one's partner, their relationship will be not durable. This can be broke any time if anyone of them will able to find the lie. For instance, in the past, I was in higher school, I told lie to my best friend about some study materials. Somehow, he came to know about the lie and he broke our relationship. It hurts me so hard. After an apology and making a promise to not lie to him, he became my best friend till now. This experience taught me that telling the truth is the fundamental key point of a relationship.
The other reasons that if one tells always true to his partner, their relationship will be never in doubt and will stay united forever. Telling the truth will make the base of friendship strong and will burgeon steady even more robust and tied. To keep trustful one's relationship is impossible without keeping clean and obvious with credence. Otherwise, it will full of doubts in any relationship. For example, a neighbor friend couple of mine, they never lie to each as far as I know them. I never have been seen them fighting till I met them. On the other hand, there was one couple, they used to lie to each other. After a couple of years, they came to know about the lies and broke up. So, according to those examples, I can say that the truth is the key to keep long and good relationships between people.
To sum up, some may oppose that always telling the truth is the important consideration in a relationship, but I think it is very crucial to keep a long and durable relationship between any persons. So, I suggest that one should always tell the truth to his partner to live a reliable and healthy good life without stressful relation problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...f someone is not telling the truth with ones partner, their relationship will be not...
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Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have never been
...er lie to each as far as I know them. I never have been seen them fighting till I met them. On ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, for instance, i think, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58461538462 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68451130012 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469230769231 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3543420691 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407552620054 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112126159359 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133511718621 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291574074356 0.150856017488 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131102907254 0.0645574589148 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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