because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
In today's modern world it's too important people update their knowledge in various fields and every day they try to learn and do new things if they want to be successful in both of their social and personal life. today's progressive world needs a conscious and expert person more than anyone else. Some people believe because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well but others disagree with this idea. From my vantage point if they do their activity at a right time and try to have a focus on it they can do all of them well. I express two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
First, all of us know this fact we have limited time for following our interest and in younger age, we can do everything easily because we have enough energy and time to try different things and follow our interests so if youth do not try new things in that age in the future they be regretful. With the development of technology awareness increases and in addition to the youth themselves, their parents or professors encourage them to try new things and learn about them. When peoples try new things they gather new experiences and if they do not tend to keep it they collect lots of information about it and its good for them, so people can do many things at specific ages after that if they do things it does not be useful for them.
Second, for being successful in every field we should focus on it and do it with enough concentration, so the important thing is that, If we can have a suitable plan and do everything in the right time with enough focus probably we can see our improvement in it. On the other hand, when we do things with enough focus and high speed we can learn many things in a short period and it's so helpful for us in this modern world. From my point of view doing just one thing in a long time is not a good idea, because over human have a multifunctional mind and focusing in one field make it limited. For example, we can find many successful persons that they are professional in different majors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Todays
...both of their social and personal life. todays progressive world needs a conscious and...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...elieve because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well bu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y are professional in different majors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41578947368 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43937006536 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463157894737 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6170370792 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.833333333 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480726384396 0.236089414692 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197415033083 0.076458572812 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181878365376 0.0737576698707 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.363952547785 0.150856017488 241% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093068045013 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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