Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that travel as a part of a group would be more reasonable than travelling alone. Most of the experienced global tourists purpose that travelling with a group that led by a tour leader is better for people than travelling alone. Contrary to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that travelling with a tour is boring and is limited people freedom. However, I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
First and foremost, travel by group would be safer than travelling alone. In a trip maybe happen some unexpecting events, such as illness, crash or missing way. For example, last year one of my friends and I going to the Kavir desert in Iran. Both of us were the experienced person on nature trips. Nonetheless, we miss the true path in the desert. These kinds of happens in deserts areas can be so dangerous, because of threatening of body dehydration and sandstorms. However, we were very lucky that the emergency service agency found us.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that journey as part of a group would be more fun. Travelling with a group is a good opportunity for making new friendships and spending happy times. For instance, you can have lunch with other people and discuss with them and have some humerus times. In addition, during these trips, you can find some new partners for future travels. For example, last year during one of my nature trips I found two partners for mountain climbing trip in summer to Damavand, Iran.
Finally, yet importantly, people can learn a lot of valuable knowledge from tour guides. All tour leaders passed a lot of training courses and they have a lot of experience in this field. For example, some travelling agencies not only taking people to different amazing trips, but also along these trips they holding several training classes for people who are interested in learning techniques, such as map reading and using GPS.
On the basis of reasons that were mentioned above, I am convinced that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Because it is safer, happier and more interesting and also it would be an opportunity to learn useful information and make new friends.
- To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign country. 73
- TPO 48 80
- TPO 46 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...xample, last year one of my friends and I going to the Kavir desert in Iran. Both...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.745 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57739694265 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5125 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7951101726 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.380952381 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0476190476 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339708207417 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110033299429 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170698687301 0.0737576698707 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215294506351 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178443550069 0.0645574589148 276% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.