The childhood is the happiest phase of human's life
Our life is full of happy moments and unforgettable experiences. It is widely known that childhood is one of the happiest phases we live by a lot of reasons. But I would not dare to say is the happiest one. Adolescence, adulthood and old age are stages where we live a lot of good moments too. However, I strongly believe that childhood is one of the best because there we had our first experiences in life. We could feel love from everyone not matter what we did, we were the center of attention in the family and our wishes never were disputed.
When we remember our childhood, the first thing we want to do is comeback in time to change something we did. We were so naïve and we thought we knew everything. Everybody loved us even if we did a total mess. Besides, we did things that now we might be ashamed to do, but that is the beauty of childhood.
Moreover, we received the attention from all the family. Everybody wanted to see the litter boy and know what he had learnt. All people around wanted you to hear their stories and advices at time to begin the school. In your birthday’s day your parents wanted to surprise you with great gifts and parties. To sum up, you were the center of attention and everybody wanted to get fun with you.
On the other hand, our parents had to hold up all our spontaneous wishes. All what we wanted to do we could get it with crying or begging for it. Our whims were granted because everybody wanted us to be the happiest boy in the world.
To conclude, for all these reasons our childhood is a phase so happy in our life. We will always keep the best memories and the lessons we learnt from them.
- Think critically about the following statement. A universal language should replace all languages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a universal language. 73
- People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties in modern life. Some read; some exercises; others work in their garden. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer. 86
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different sources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
- Compare the advantages of marrying at young age to marrying at an older age. State and support your preference. 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es and the lessons we learnt from them.
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.185840707965 0.229887763892 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.197640117994 0.158761421928 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0560471976401 0.0866891130778 65% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0383480825959 0.046263068375 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.132743362832 0.0685040099705 194% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.094395280236 0.118717715034 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0206489675516 0.0351676179071 59% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40105460294 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0412979351032 0.0309702414327 133% => OK
Particles: 0.00589970501475 0.00188951952338 312% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0766961651917 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147492625369 0.0209618222197 70% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176991150442 0.0139019557991 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1655.0 2387.08602151 69% => OK
No of words: 309.0 408.028673835 76% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35598705502 5.86048508987 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.265372168285 0.338922669872 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.184466019417 0.251872472559 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122977346278 0.174417080927 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0776699029126 0.112833075102 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40105460294 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.7200010847 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.45 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3612946852 48.84282405 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.75 120.699889404 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.45 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.45 0.644075263715 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 33.8966019417 45.7405998639 74% => OK
Elegance: 0.816 1.45489161554 56% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31065860357 0.300154397459 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115496038655 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0702207737955 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.550104063037 0.497263757937 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112931056714 0.151897553556 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130243652675 0.114077575197 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947419291311 0.0781384742642 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.333962398885 0.336927656856 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0866627008007 0.067059652881 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206293044324 0.210909579961 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900720327701 0.0618886996521 146% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
--------------------------
Rates: 67 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 20 Out of 30