children should not be allowed to play computer games
Having glimpse of the game situation in the world, we will be marveled at the variety of computer games that children like. In today’s world, playing computer games is an integral part of children’s daily life. Many children like to play computer games when they have leisure time. recently, a controversial proposal was brought to public eye, suggesting that children should not be allowed to play with them in that playing computer games is a waste of time. From my point of view, I cannot agree with it more because playing computer games cost much money and time.
To begin with, playing computer games leads children to bad performance in school. Attracted by computer games that become more fancy and attractive than they were before, many children cannot resist the beautiful characters and exciting plot as well as fancy clothes in the games, which, as a result, leads to addiction to computer games and spend much time on it. Some of them virtually spend all their leisure time and energy on games instead of doing homework or reading, which gives rise to failure in exams and blame from parents. For example, my brother was addicted to Overwatch, a popular shooting game among the teenagers, when he was in high school. Hardly did he do homework or review for tests at home due to the fact he devoted all his time to games and left not enough time for study. Without a doubt, he got many D in his final exams.
Furthermore, playing games costs much money, which even leads to crime. To illustrate, everyone in this world wants to be stronger. This is same with virtual characters in the games. In order to make their beloved virtual characters more powerful or beautiful, children would invest their pocket money, what is worse, some of them may steal from their parents if they do not have enough money. Take my friend Micheal as an example, who was once a lovely boy with a kind heart. However, when he was addicted to League of Legends, another prevailing game, everything changed. He spent all his money earned from part-time on this game, and even stole money from his classmates. It is a shame for him that he is in jail now.
Admittedly, as a common notion denotes, every coin has two sides. Even though we testify to the drawbacks of computer games, it does not mean all computer games doing harm to children. I concede some games are good for children’s intelligence and mental health, including chess and some poke games. Nevertheless, children may still become addicted to them if they are not controlled properly.
To sum up, playing computer games not only cost children much time, but also leads students to bad performance in school. In considering all the details mentioned above, there is every reason to believe that children should not be allowed to play with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Recently
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, for example, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2337.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81855670103 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52235324957 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498969072165 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3518734441 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.48 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457305918895 0.236089414692 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139793009058 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136743919863 0.0737576698707 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310539183703 0.150856017488 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178644524836 0.0645574589148 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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