As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the class room . do you agree or disagree give specific reason and support your answer.
Discoveries of science are so miserable and amazing, there use is depend on people how they find it for themselves. In increasing world of technology no doubt it overcome the everything and decrease the need of humans but there are numerous things that technology can not do. One of them is teaching like a teacher. Teachers not only play an significant role in class, they also have their importance in society. In my opinion computers are helpful in education sysytem but not replace the necessity of teacher. Thiss essay will discuss about the teacher's role.
First, computers may transform the life of students in multitude ways by helping them in learning different software and solve their maths problem in seconds but they can teach students like teacher. If you do not understand something they are not able to see you expressions that you did not understand. On the contrary even you do not speak but teacher always know that you do not understand, then she elaborate the topic in more easy words for you. For instance in school i was a shy girl I did not have enough confidence to ask questions but my face told teachers all things and she explain me the complete chapter of science in extra class.
Secondly, teachers help you in you problems if you share it with them. In colleges and school there is always a students advisor who guide the students according to their strength and weaknesses. For example, when I was in college I was confused fo which field I should go on, my advisor gave me the counselling session and made my mind for the things what I want to be. In addition, computers can only solve thr problem that are course related.
In conclusion, I do not agree with the statement because in my life I had thousands of experiences and many arduous situations in which my teachers helped me a lot. Computers are the need of students of this generation but not take place of the teacher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67159763314 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62745880882 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544378698225 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8393012209 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244420732475 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759366705735 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455255418651 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138672817711 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392370614052 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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