Do you agree? childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
In my opinion, childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. , I lived in my childhood one of my best significant events that happened to me in my life. Although these events occurred to me from a long time I still memorized it until now.
First, I enjoyed with playing football and also swimming in the pool when I was a child. Every Thursday, when I meet my family at the end of the week. I play football in the garden of our home and I loved my uncle very much he always says jokes to me and makes me laugh all the time. Also, my uncle is a professional swimmer. He accompanied me to the pool and taught me the swimming every Thursday. I considered the swimming is my favorite sport in my life I liked it because of him. As a result, I think that my family especially my uncle helped me to live my happiest times in my life in the childhood.
In addition to, Friday is one of my best days in the week because my father take me every Friday, and we go to the cinema. We always watching animation movies, this type of film is my most preferred movies to me until now. Moreover, we go to a restaurant to eat pizza. I like pizza, and I feel that if I was able to eat it every day, I will do that because I think it is very delicious and make me happy. Finally, we enjoy with watching matches in our club; my club organized a small event called challenge champion every Friday. I liked the to watch challenges like these matches, it's fascinating to me and also my father. This championship consists of eight teams and three rounds. The first round contains four games and the second round two matches. The last shot is the final round of one competition, and the winner receives the trophy in the end. I think these memories very connected and accompanied to me in my life. Always I remember it. In fact, I am unfortunate because this event is over and converted to just memories. Now I am living in adulthood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is the happiest time of a persons life. , I lived in my childhood one of my best ...
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Line 5, column 927, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...ected and accompanied to me in my life. Always I remember it. In fact, I am unfortuna...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d accompanied to me in my life. Always I remember it. In fact, I am unfortunate b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, i feel, i think, in addition, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25479452055 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52910585427 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487671232877 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9927121136 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5217391304 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8695652174 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107328788254 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410340582305 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977404005579 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111940806335 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892482969526 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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