childhood is the most beautiful time of a person's life. Do you agree
In my opinion, childhood is the most beautiful time in my life; I lived in my childhood one of my best significant moments that happened to me in my life. Although these events occurred to me from a long time I still memorized it until now.
First, I enjoyed in my childhood with playing football and also swimming in the pool. Every Thursday, when I meet my family members at the end of the week. I play football in the garden of our home with my cousin. Also, I loved my uncle very much he always says jokes to me and makes me laugh all the time. My uncle is a professional swimmer. He is always accompanying me to the pool and taught me the swimming in the pool. I am considering that the swimming is my favorite sport in my life, in fact, I liked it because of him. As a result, I think that my family especially my uncle helped me to live my happiest times in my life in the childhood.
Besides, Friday is one of my best days in the week because my father is taking me every Friday, going with me to the cinema in the morning. We watching animation movies, this type of films is my most preferred movies to me until now. Moreover, we are going to a restaurant to eat pizza. I like pizza. I feel that if I was able to eat it every day, I will do that because I think pizza very delicious and make me happy. In the evening, we enjoy with watching matches in our club; my club is organizing a small event called challenge champion every Friday. I liked to watch challenges like these matches, it's fascinating to me and also my father. This championship consists of eight teams and three rounds. The first round contains four games and the second round two matches. The last shot is the final round of one competition, and the winner receives the trophy in the end. I think these memories very connected and accompanied to me through my life. I always remember it.
In conclusion, I am living in adulthood now. But I am unfortunate because these events in childhood were over and converted to just memories.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34920634921 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55334727731 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492063492063 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0792752997 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103500386793 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285347485598 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464369779271 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851210735913 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068958417021 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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