Do you agree or diagree?
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similiar to their parents' job than to choose jobs which are very different from their parents' jobs.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every one is different from the others. Even twins have different habits , tastes and opinions in their life. Every one has rights to choose own field of interest to do job. A child might have different school of thought then his parents. Therefore, I disagree that children should choose the same job as their parents have.
To begin with, children might have interest in different field than family members. If a person has interest in various field , he can be more successful. For instance, most of the members in my family are in computer field. One of my cousines is graduated in computer science. He was engineer, but he has interest in cooking. One day he quit his job as an engineer and created his own cafe. Today he is an owner of successful and popular restaurant. Even though, none of my family members has ever think of opening a restaurant.Thus, interet matters a lot of than doing the same job as the parents do.
Secondly, diversity of field will increase in family if children choose different job. Family members can have variety of topics for discussion
because of diversity in field. For example. one of my friends is a dentist. His father is is professor. His mother works at library. Whenever, I visit his home , I have observed that they never stick to one topic . They have varieties in opinion and point of the view that I generally like. Therefore, it will have more fun if everyone is from different field.
To sum up, choices and interests are essential parts to build a successful career. Parents would like to see their children at summit in their life. And it is possible only when children have their own interest and choice. Thus, I believe that children should chhose different jobs from their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75247524752 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55984198947 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501650165017 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4966225379 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.6 100.406767564 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.12 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238992409914 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703722256726 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856044290507 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15805475951 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850117558914 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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