Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
The increasing in automation will lead to people losing their jobs
Some people argue that the increase in automation in the working field will lead to many people losing their jobs. I completely agree with this statement of increasing in number of automatic equipment’s in the field of production and manufacturing will make more people to lose their jobs. I feel this way for two reasons which I will examine in this essay.
First of all, the automatic equipment’s are error-free and produces manufacturing goods with precise accuracy. In today’s world, people demand products with high standard quality with the best performance. Consequently, automatic equipment are calibrated with the values to manufacture the goods with high accuracy leading minimum errors. For instance, generally people ask for products with better efficiency with minimum maintenance. Thus, goods manufacture with the help of machine are higher in quality, however people generally have tolerance while measuring and manufacturing goods that leads to errors. It is important that due to higher accuracy, people generally demand products manufacture by the machines rather than human beings which leads to people lose their jobs.
Secondly, the automatic equipment’s are designed to work in harsh climatic conditions and are able to work for long durable period of time without maintenance. However, human beings are emotional, do eat regularly to withstand long working period and take rest in between the working period in order to get rid of fatigue. This is best exemplified by my personal experience. Generally, in forging process, human body has to resist high environmental temperature of furnace of 1000 degree Celsius and sometimes feel sick during work whereas machine can easily overcome that temperature and can withstand longer period of time without repair. As a result, automatic machines are preferring in comparison to human beings leading to massive job loss.
In conclusion, to my mind, the rise in automation will leads more job loss in the near future. This is because automatic machines are accurate in production and produces products without errors and because they are able to withstand harsh climatic conditions where people are unable to overcome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: increasing
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...to my mind, the rise in automation will leads more job loss in the near future. This ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44281524927 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8660374814 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489736070381 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0815631246 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28607638614 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103392695556 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103496159037 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177962417538 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121830721538 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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