Do you agree or disagree? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying in today’s competitive world where we live, everyone should be familiar with the history of the world and a person can acquire such information from different ways. Although some people believe that a person should pass some history related courses in the university, others oppose them and hold the idea that passing history courses is not necessary for students. Personally speaking, I think students should not be required to participate in history classes. I will elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, one of the important goals of everyone who attends university is to become prepare for his future job. In fact, when a person registers in a university and selects a major for himself, he wants to pass courses which provide him some job required knowledge and skills. As a result, when a university told the students that they should participate in history classes, students cannot pass the courses which help them to find a better job after their graduation. For example, when I studied electrical engineering in the IUST university, the university noticed that during our education, we should register in three history classes, and without passing these courses, university did not allow students to become graduate. Therefore, I could not take in some related courses to my major which was taught by very well known professors. After graduation from IUST, I tried to find an appropriate job, but I realized that I could not apply for some jobs, because these jobs had some requirements which I did not have them since I did not passes some important courses in the university.
Second, universities always spend a lot of money for each class which hold on the campus. Also, students should allocate a large fraction of their time for this propose. However when student oblige to register in history classes because students always become reluctant to participate in those classes since they feel that such courses do not have benefits for them and university should allocate its financial resources to the more important issues, not only the university waste its money but also students realized that they waste their time because they do not gain any beneficial skill or information during history classes. For instance, when I was at AUT university, I realized that the university had not any required history courses for graduation, which caused to ask university staff about this decision. They told me that several years ago, in AUT university, like other universities in Iran, student had to take some required history courses to become graduate, but after some times, university decided to cancel this law based on results of a history exam in which all students who passed the history courses should participate because when the university’s faculties had considered the results of this exam, they had realized that there was not a significant change in historical knowledge of students, and student only wanted to pass such courses without any purpose for gaining historical knowledge.
In conclusion, have considering aforementioned reasons and examples into account, in my opinion, students should not be required to register for history classes because not only students gain nothing which can help them to find a proper job in the future but also universities invest their money on the wrong way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.0286738351 245% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2844.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 550.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17090909091 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72756119687 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430909090909 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 909.0 618.680645161 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.094383304 48.9658058833 288% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.75 100.406767564 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.375 20.6045352989 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240752352913 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982494869036 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055299930998 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171956017425 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232174981364 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 11.7677419355 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 58.1214874552 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.1575268817 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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