do you agree or disagree children should be required to follow rules set by their parents
Parents are the most beautiful gifts from god. They raise us carefully since our birth to be good people. In my opinion, I agree that children should be required to follow strict rules, which are setting by their parents because they will assist their sons to avoid making mistakes.
To begin with, our life is an adventure. When parents put some rules, they simply want to protect their kids from life’s dangers. Parents want for their kids to live a relaxing life or a quiet life. For example, sometimes, the family prohibits the child to go out with unknown friends because parents are afraid. Children never know what is wrong and what is right. Because mistakes are often made, youth need some advice from their parents to avoid problems. That’s why I concur that children should always be required to pursue parent’s strict rules to avoid making mistakes in their life.
On the other hand, when parents always prohibit their kids to do what they want and set strong guidelines, children and specially teenagers will start escape and not follow parents’ guidelines. Life is changing, it’s not in the past. When parents adjust their rules, they should make fair in their guidelines to avoid breaking their rules. For example, my friend always tries to follow parent’s restrictions but sometimes, these rules are becoming over protective, and my friend becomes angry from that rules and she starts to not follow their parent’s rules and I advised her to talk with her parents to less their restrictions and this will increase power of relationship. When she talked to her parents, her parent realized that; therefore, they started to decrease their number of rules and strict rules. That’s why I prefer parents should make fair rules and children will follow them.
To conclude, I agree that children should be required to follow parent’s rules to avoid making mistakes in their life, but parents should make fair rules to help children follow them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11854103343 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52504751797 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468085106383 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1922564665 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0588235294 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430978624871 0.236089414692 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1516097491 0.076458572812 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136527294033 0.0737576698707 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339025289014 0.150856017488 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101456189803 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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