do you agree or disagree? employees should work fast and risk doing mistakes rather than work slowly and make sure everything is correct?
Since the begining of the current century, companies have forced their employees to work fast to increae their economic sucess. Some people believe that they should work fast and risk doing mistakes; however others casts doubles in this belief. From a personal perspective, workers shouls work slowly and make sure that everything os correct, given that it inhances safety, rational desicions and productivity.
The first and foremost point, making mistakes in some professional jos are very dangerous and could not be fixed. A vivid example that can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above is pharmasists and phisians should make sure that everything is correct, because patients' safety is number one priority. Provided that they are relax on doing their work, they will ensure strong health care system. Consequently, working slowely could promot safety.
Next coupled with safety,rrational thinking is another benefit of slowly working. to put it in another word, relax working gives employees the chance to analyze revelant information, such as data, facts opinions and junjements. A statistic done by The National Assosiation of finance in California found that, although workoing fast could increase companies' revenues, employees could do risky mistakes. On the other hand, slow working employees do mistakes less often, given that they take the chance to make optimal decisions. Therefore, realistic thinking is significant to improve guidance based on facts.
A lthough the previous reasons are the first one which cross the mind at a glance, they are not the only reasons available. There is another subtle point that must be born in mind. workes who do their tasks quickely, are so stressed and start to hate theri jobs. A survey that conducted by Oxford University found that working under stress could diminsh employees' productivity and increase the risk of some diseases , such as heart stroks and high blood pressure. However, stress-free employees can work effectively, and their minds could create new designs. As a result, relax working can boost productivity.
Taking everthing into cansideration; without a doubt, working slowly has crucial benefits, and underestimating these benefits is not logical. It is suggested that companies design new working system that helps employees to do their roles without stress and improves their work capacity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7267076621 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598382749326 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1597950629 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.7 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.55 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380044306172 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106271324981 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682238685015 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225402407198 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625582871136 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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