Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In all eras, people need to live in a group and have a relationship with others, so it can help to their life in society and mental health. In the recent decade, people may feel more need to connect with others; this is because people have to work most of their time, so they prefer to have friends to spend their free time with them. I believe that the ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness. I feel this way because of two main reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, old friends can be more reliable, which is a crucial subject in people's life. People may face some problems and experience some sadness and depression; thus they need a trustworthy person who can listen to their emotions and help them to move on and be happy. Obviously, a long period of time can cause people to know their people around well, so they can trust them without any concern. For instance, I have an old friend, we are friends for eleven years, who is a reliable friend to me. I had some mental problems, and I felt some depression, therefore I need someone who can understand me and also be trustworthy. Subsequently, I could speak to her peacefully, which had a positive influence on my mind and mood.
Secondly, Old friends can be good advisers, who are helpful in our personal life. All people are located in a specific situation, that they have to make a decision. Therefore, they need a person to consult with them and guide them to make the best decision. Needless to say, it is important consulting with a person who knows us and our situation very well, because their advice can be suitable more. Hence, old friends can be familiar with us more and better, so they can be good advisers according to our personality and situation. Pay attention to my old friend that I mentioned before as an example, she knows my personality very well. A boy requested me to be my boyfriend, so I was in doubt to accept or not, so I decided to ask my friend and consult with her.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that a long period of time friendships is more important for happiness. This is because old friends are more reliable, which can help us to relax. In addition, old friends can be good advisers, which can be helpful in our personal life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...he ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is mo...
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Line 1, column 429, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...th a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness. I feel...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...move on and be happy. Obviously, a long period of time can cause people to know their people a...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...clusion, I strongly believe that a long period of time friendships is more important for happi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50704225352 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57302267358 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43896713615 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8686366197 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218016671965 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881629004992 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111249249755 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157088843059 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793508170572 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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