Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In modern times people are more curious to learn about other countries and broaden their horizon. There are many ways to collect the information about other nation, one of that is advertisement. Advertisement can affect individuals through their audio-visuals and can change the person’s perspective about other country. In ensuing essay, I will explain how commercial can be helpful to know a country.
First, commercial is best way to attract tourist to the country. People get the knowledge about other country’s natural attractions, culture, life style, tradition and festival by advertisement. For example, when I saw advertisement of the USA, I came to know that world famous “Statue of the Liberty” is in the New York state. I planned my trip to New York after watching the commercial. Similarly, commercial give idea about countries economy also. How people are dressed in the commercial, their houses, and their life style can provide more information about their economy.
Secondly, advertisement regarding education in abroad is very popular nowadays. That motivates youth to pursue their education in abroad. For example, many students from India are going for their further education to the countries such as USA, Australia, New Zealand etc. Also, many students choose to go to Russia and China as they found many university options to build their career in medicine. Such temporary migration can also benefit the economy of the host countries. Students can make their living in the country or come back to their own country and use the gained knowledge for betterment of the mother country. This way advertisement creates a bridge to share the talent and knowledge.
Let’s put it in nut shell, according above-mentioned reasons, it is crystal clear that advertisement is the media which give information about countries culture, economy, politics and advancement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...to know a country. First, commercial is best way to attract tourist to the country. ...
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Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...rcial give idea about countries economy also. How people are dressed in the commerci...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dge to share the talent and knowledge. Let's put it in nut shell, accordin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05456430852 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.368421944 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11085996515 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386402666559 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331279284375 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748396137725 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324462423125 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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