Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays higher education makes more people pay attention but there will be different subjects in higher education, there will be major subjects and minor subjects, and some people think all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their filed of study is. but in my opinion I intend to disagree with this idea. because the students have their own right to choose which subject they whan to study.
First of all, let students choose subject by their selives It can improve their learning efficiency and motivation. Because that subjects are always is them hobby or they are interesting in it . This will make them more engaged in learning and will not feel tired. Such as I am a boy who likes technology very much, so I will choose subjects like artificial intelligence, software development and information technology when I go to college. But if you must let me to participate in the history courses. It is so difficult for my and I will have no motivation to learn, if the courses is too boring may be I will sleep on class. and it not only wastes time but also energy and money.
Scondly It's the 21st century, and technology has taken more of a place in universities. I believe that technology will become more important in the future. And history is a thing of the past. No matter how we study it, we can't change it. and at this time onbody will take about it at free time. For example in the future I will study abroad if I chat with my college classmates. The topic of frequent conversation is usually future developments rather than history.
At least the In fact, history is also a subject worth knowing. History can bring us a lot of valuable experience and some spirit worth learning. We can look up some books to understand it after class, and it doesn't take too much time to learn.
- It s difficult for teachers to be both popular students like them and effective helping students in learning 73
- Some young people are free in the evenings or have days off at school which way can bring them the most benefit Accumulating work experience by taking a part time job or volunteering in a community Learning to play a sport Learning to play a musical instr 73
- Parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their children s future for them 88
- Agree disagree In order to make a business successful it must spend a lot of money on advertising 3
- Parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their children s future for them 70
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Suggestion: maybe
... to learn, if the courses is too boring may be I will sleep on class. and it not only ...
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...oo boring may be I will sleep on class. and it not only wastes time but also energy...
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...the past. No matter how we study it, we cant change it. and at this time onbody will...
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...ks to understand it after class, and it doesnt take too much time to learn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, at least, for example, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64525993884 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5781058183 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.7507623266 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.95 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201183292532 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503760367885 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633327052726 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124339465434 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093800808235 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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