What is the most useful action for people to help environment in their local communities?
1. Plant trees and create parks
2. Persuade local shops to stop providing plastic bags for consumers
3. Increase access to public transportation (such as buses and trains), and reduce the automobiles on road
The process of developing economy must bring destruction to environment. This has resulted in present environment is difficult to live, with the consequent emphasise on environment conservation that people have slowed the pace of development and go into action for clean environment. Therefore, Some people think that stop using plastic bags of consumers or increase access to public transportation that is a good way to help environment. However, I don’t agree with that. In my opinion, plant trees and create parks can solve the problem of environment more directly.
Trees are able to change the quality of air, that convert deleterious gases like nitrogen dioxide into oxygen by photosynthesis. Since the produce of massive industrial objects, bulky polluted gas was discharged by factory, which is the first reason that make environment polluted. And trees are the best way to solve this problem, more trees are planted can convert more polluted gas into clean gas. Trees not only clean air, but also beautify the environment. For example, Zhengzhou, a city I live, about 20 years ago , you could see trees anywhere you go that fresh air that you could breathe everyday. Birds flew freely in the sky and animals walked on the ground at liberty. However, with the development of economy, environment was getting worse and worse. All of things in memory changed completely. No fresh air could breathe, no birds flew freely and no animals walked in liberty. The sake of all is the all tree were almost cut. In turn, this example means that trees are very important to improve environment.
In addition, creating parks is also good for improve environment, such as increasing the biodiversity of the local community. As we all known, the healthy development of environment cannot leave cooperation of various animals. When species of animals in the environment become more, the process of ecosystem will become more quickly, so the deleterious substance of environment will also disappear more quickly. The ecologists have done a experiment, that there were three boxes that inner environment was same, but species level was different. Three weeks later, the ecologists found boxes’inner environment changed, and the quality of environment of the box that the kind of species was the most affluent was the best. This experiment illustrate the importance of biodiversity well. All in all, there is no doubt that planting trees and creating parks is the best way to improve environment.
By contrast, another two ways are obviously not good. If plastic bags are prohibited, maybe the so-called white pollution will be relieved, but inconvenience is largely increased. In the same way, although increasing public transportation and reducing the automobiles on roads may reduce vehicle exhaust, because of the reduction of travel mode, inconvenience also will be brought. And comparing to the corresponding advantage and disadvantage, the costs is more bigger than benefits, so if we do as these two ways, a lot of disadvantage will be happen.
From what has been discussed above, I can draw a conclusion that plant trees and create parks is the best way to help environment. It’s not only because more trees can product more oxygen, but also parks can increase biodiversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, kind of, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 36.0 8.0752688172 446% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2781.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2770398482 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98525644709 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510436432638 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 859.5 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1836311083 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8965517241 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1724137931 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86206896552 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234771783772 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561421437674 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714738109392 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135845166048 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785636598334 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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