Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although history is one of the subjects that we can learn a lot from, I personally believe that university and high education courses must contain more specific subjects which pertan students' major directly. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, almost in all countries history is on all schools curriculum and students learn about their own country history and world's history during their education at school. Thus there is no need to impose history subject on university students because they already learnt the important parts of it.
Plus, the people who choose to carry on their education at universities, chiefly want to become more proficient in their own major, therefore I believe that university must be a place to get enough education on subjects we want to learn to, not more detail of things we already learnt back at school. For instance, I remember the first semester I got at university in the major of electrical engineering, I got Persian literature as a mandatory course. I know that it is an essential lesson for all people who speak Persian, however, on the first semester for an engineering student it was too unnecessary and waste of time.
At last, there are some courses at university which are up to students to choose among the options university gives them. If someone is really in fond of a special topic, they can pick the one which is more suitable to their desires. University can simply give the option of history subjects to the students and let them opt it as their free course if they want to. To be more specific, it should not always be an obligation to push someone toward something, sometimes all it takes is to give people the authority to choose and a little bit of encouragement.
To conclude, I don't see any fair reason to force all majors' university students to pick history as a mandatory course, despite all the great lessons this subject contains. However, I believe it can be an optional course for those students who like to learn more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77464788732 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63624952258 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495774647887 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0994467798 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.384615385 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218469170983 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864623692744 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424848887698 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138242938517 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443938624309 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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