As a student majoring in Computer Science, I was required to take basic science courses like Physics and Biology in the first two years in my undergraduate study. I was really frustrated and upset about it, and almost all of my classmates felt this way as well. As far as I am concerned, I think university students shouldn't be required to take basic science courses if they don't study in these fields. I will state my reasons as the following.
First all of, time is limited and it is important how to allocate the time. If students are asked to take the basic science courses, they may do not have much time to study subjects in their own major, which leads to bad performance in the latter. Take one of my classmates Tom as an example. When he was in the high school, he was keen on programming. He participated in various programming contests and was awarded many times, which gave him a chance to enter the university. On the contrary, he was not interested in biology. To pass the exam, he spent lots of time and made a great effort to study biology. Though he passed the exam eventually, he didn't perform well in the courses related to programming, because preparing biology exam took so much time that he didn't have time to practice his programming. In this instance, learning biology could affect Tom performance in programming, which Tom was good at, not mention to those who were not good at programming at all.
Secondly, learning basic science courses can be a burden of students. Even when we only learn the subjects required in our own fields, we may feel overwhelmed in that subjects are too many and some of them are quite challenging. When I was in the second year, I was required to study algorithms which needed quite a lot practice and Physics, which was one of the most difficult science courses in my mind, at the same time. In order to get good marks in both classes, I worked really hard, such as sleeping late and getting up early, studying all the day even in the weekends, giving up do the routine exercises. My health was not very well that time. Now I think back of that period of time, I wish I was not required to take the Physical course so that I could live in a happier life.
In conclusion, I oppose that the university students should take basic science courses if they do not major in that subject.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to give your opinion. 32
- It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: All university students should take basic science courses regardless of their field of study. 70
- Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. 71
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: All university students should take basic science courses regardless of their field of study. 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
... concerned, I think university students shouldnt be required to take basic science cours...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d to take basic science courses if they dont study in these fields. I will state my ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 653, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...hough he passed the exam eventually, he didnt perform well in the courses related to ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 768, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... biology exam took so much time that he didnt have time to practice his programming. ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 678, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ell that time. Now I think back of that period of time, I wish I was not required to take the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52470588235 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58876358245 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487058823529 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0815125528 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.15 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187434018556 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669969938702 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909116831673 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18135467157 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108974574055 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.